HW 2/8

Hello. For tonight, I would like you to read the two essays closely and make marginal notes. Using the rubric, determine what the score is and point out the positive and negative attributes of the paper. What did the student do well? What did he/she do poorly? How is the intro? Did they mention the author? did they mention the techniques? Is it organized?  We will work on the final paragraph and go over them with each other tomorrow. Have a good night.